Monday, May 2, 2011

Final Project

Final Project by Daniel
8th grade English
Pine point
May 19, 2011


Instruction Manual for Growing Up

1. Find time to do your favorite things everyday. You could build with Legos, draw or sketch, or play outside. If you have fun each day, it will make you a very happy person.
2. Next, remember to play and act smart. Listen to your parents and teachers, and always follow the rules. Doing this will make you become more respectful.
3. When people are making you angry, talk to your parents and teachers to give you advice about what to do. By learning how to manage your anger at a young age, you will keep yourself from anger the rest of your life.
4. Always be true to your friends. Never lie or treat them poorly. Keep them close to you as long as possible. This will make you a very faithful friend.
5. Learn from parents and siblings to make healthy choices. For example, I leaned by my older brother to never abuse alcohol. He also taught me how to properly exercise to stay fit and healthy. 
If you use this manual to help guide you in the right path for a healthy, strong, and respectful life I can assure you are making one of the best choices of your life.

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Letter to Juliet

Dear, Juliet
            My name is Scout, and I read your book Romeo and Juliet. I have to write an essay about growing up, and I would like to write about you and me. I have been thinking about our fathers and realized that both of our fathers were important as we were growing up.
            In some ways our fathers were alike. Both of them loved us very much. For example, your father told Romeo that he had to wait two summers before he could date you. He was trying to protect you so that Romeo wouldn't take advantage of you. My father loves me too. For instance, he won’t let me walk alone but he makes sure that Jem my older brother is always walks with me. He’s trying to make sure that I’m always safe.
            However, I believe that my father is more accepting that your father. For example, my father defended a black man named Tom Robinson, who was mistakenly charged for raping a white woman. In this way my father taught me to grow up without prejudice. Your father was less accepting. He didn't allow your family to have any contact with the Montague’s your families arch enemies. You had to secretly talk to Romeo in the bushes. So you learned how to be stealthy and lie to your father.
            When I read your story I wished that your father could have been more accepting like my father. This way you would have been able to date Romeo, and learn whether you had found your life partner. Although I am younger than you, I hope someday my father will let me date a nice young man, even if he is different for my family.

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3/6/11
Diary Entire
Dear Diary
            Today I visited Forman and saw the benefits it gives me for growing up.
It’s a great school for kids with dyslexia. The teachers at Forman will give me help with strategies so that reading and writing will come more easily. Therefore, I will become a more successful reader and writer. Being away from home will make me a more independent person. It will allow me to learn how to advocate for myself. Although being away from my parents makes me nervous, I will learn to deal with my problems more independently. At Forman I will be able to do some of my favorite activities. I can take photography and learn new things that may lead me to a future career. I also can try video editing, which I have some experience in, but I would like to get better at. After visiting Forman I realized there are many different opportunities that will help me grow up.
                                                               

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Poem on Growing up




How does it feel to grow-up?
Can you see the change in a day?
Or maybe a minute?
Do you understand what the word “grow” means?
How does growing impact your life?
Or your mom’s life?
Or even your dog’s life?
How does it make you a better person?
Or even a worse person?
Does aging mean the same thing as growing?
Does it mean you’re getting older and stronger?
Or just older and weaker?
Think about growing
Think deeply
Don't be afraid
It won’t bite
It can only help
Growing is normal
And changes happen for a reason
Change is a part of growing up.

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Wanted Poster

Thursday, April 21, 2011

How Does Real Love Happen?

An essay by Daniel
8th grade English
Pine point
April 20, 2011

How Does Real Love Happen?
An Essay About Love Happening

Have you ever experienced true love? Or maybe you don't know the meaning of love. Love can be expressed or found in many different ways. It could be found in the simplest love to your dog or even to a classmate.
Have you ever thought about how love makes you feel? While the word “LOVE” makes some people feel happy, it can scare other people, because they don't want to get into a deep relationship. Some people may think you want something out of them and won’t like that, causing your relationship to break apart. Love is a powerful word and can make people feel good or even bad. To me love doesn't start until you have found your life partner. People may say that they love somebody when they are at a young age, but really they just have a friendship with a boyfriend or girlfriend. When young people have a boyfriend or girlfriend, they learn important lessons that help them in their next relationships so that they can eventually find a wonderful life partner. When you feel you have found your life partner, you will be ready to say “I love you”.
When I think of true love I think of my parents, as my Mom’s good friend Erin did when she wrote, “I want to wish 2 of my favorite people, My BFF and her husband a very Happy 21th Wedding Anniversary! I know very few people who are happily married let alone who love each still as much as you two do! You are an inspiration for true love and we should all be so lucky to find that as you two have!! I love you guys!!! XOXO, E”. Although my parents sometimes argue they will always Cherries each other. They fell in love in collage and after 21 years of marriage, three active sons, six crazy dogs, still love each other at home and in my own opinion I feel they will never split apart.
Upon reflection there are many types of love, there is the hopeful, youthful and true martial love and agape love? Agape is the most holy, the most sacred and strongest love. Agape is a Greek word that comes from the bible. Hopefully for anybody who is looking a strong loving relationship they can experience Agape love by living there life for god. 


Self assessment:
1. I’m continuing to work on expanding my CM’s.
2. One strong point is see in my writing is my SD’s
3. A week point I see is my closing par I almost feel like I didn't spend enough time on it and it didn't come out to good.

How Does Real Love Happen?


An outline by Daniel
8th grade English
Pine point
April 20, 2011

How Does Real Love Happen?


TS: Have you ever thought about how love makes you feel?
SD: To me love doesn't start until you have found you life partner.
CM: People may say that they love somebody when they are at a young age but really they just have a boyfriend or girlfriend.
CM: I feel like they say it so that they can keep there friendship together as long as possible.
SD: Using the word may make you even split from your relationship.
CM: Some people may think you want something out of them and wouldn't like that, also causing your relationship to break away.
CS: Love is a powerful word and can make people feel sometimes good or even bad.
CM: Using the word love, in the wrong sentence, to the wrong person, at the wrong time, could be bad.

Tuesday, April 19, 2011

A Freindship Sonnet


A sonnet by Daniel
8th grade English
Pine point
April 19, 2011


A Friendship Sonnet

Friendship is a long lasting friend for life
When you are depressed you can talk to friends
Friendship is something that is always nice
Don't be afraid if you have no bends
You may not be cool but you have ice
You are in a struggle don't let it end
Don't break it up with a sharp and strong knife
Keep it strong with glue so it does not bend






Wednesday, April 13, 2011

Comparing Friendships

An essay by Daniel
8th grade English
Pine point
April 13, 2011

Friendships Can Be Related to Anything
Comparing Your Friendships


Friends and friendships are two totally different things. You can have many friends, some that you like more than others. But friendships can be with a friend except there much closer and you rather do much more with them. I have many friends but I only have a few friendships with some of those friends.
Have you ever related your friendship to something? I have a ton of friends and I enjoy each and every one of them. But sometimes I compare them to myself hoping that some of the things they do would be like the things I do. Every one is different and I understand that but I wish sometimes my friends could be more like me. I tend to choose friends that have the same interests as me. For example, David and I both love to play airsoft, diving into bushes, willing to get banged up, whispering to each other, hoping we won’t get shot. If a person doesn’t like the same games as me I tend not to hang out with them as much. Sometimes I could even compare my friendship with David to a tree. Every so often we branch off and grow in different directions. But ultimately meet again and at our foundation the roots. We need to water and fertilize our friendships in order to let them last long and grow feverously.
You may have a lot of friends but only a few friendships. As long as you have a great friendship with someone you can have a wonderful time all your life. And even make great memories. Those memories can be stored away and looked at any time and you can realize what a great life you have had, all because of a friendship.  







Self assessment:
1. I’m continuing to work on expanding my CM’s.
2. One strong point is see in my writing is my SD’s
3. A week point I see is my closing par I almost feel like I didn't spend enough time on it and it didn't come out to good.

Comparing Friendshps outline


An essay by Daniel
8th grade English
Pine point
April 13, 2011

Essay 12 Outline


TS: Have you ever related your friendship to something.
SD: I have a ton of friends and I enjoy each and every one of them.
CM: But sometimes I compare them to myself hoping that some of the things they do would be like the things I do.
CM: Every one is different and I understand that but I wish sometimes my friends could be more like me.
SD: I tend to choose friends that have the same interests as me.
CM: For example, David and I both love to play airsoft, diving into bushes, willing to get banged up, whispering to each other, hoping we won’t get shot.
CM: If a person doesn’t like the same games as me I tend not to hang out with them as much.
SD: Sometimes I could even compare my friendship with David to a tree.
CM: Every so often we branch off and grow in different directions.
CM: But ultimately meet again and at our foundation the roots.
CS: We need to water and fertilize our friendships in order to let them last long and grow feverously.

Tuesday, April 5, 2011

Teenager issues

An essay by Daniel
8th grade English
Pine point school
April 5, 2011


Did you ever think about the issues teenagers have when growing up. These issues can affect there life in so many ways. They can even cause permanent damage to there life. Teenagers are not the source to there problems it can sometimes be other things or people too.
Life as a teenager is great except for not having enough time to play my favorite sport like airsoft, a very fun game, with lots of excitement, and an experience you will never forget, because of homework I can’t play that game. There are thousands of teenagers that have problems growing up. One would be that they can do the things they love because of school. The teenagers can’t get all there home work done and play there favorite games so there stuck in a dilemma. Teenagers have to give up there favorite game just for home work. Also teenagers are struggling with food.
Teenagers and also including children die every day because of hunger. Without food you can’t grow and not growing is a big issue. Education is another obstacle to growing up. Most people don't have a lot of money or are poor. Parents can’t afford for there kids to go to school.
Teenagers need a healthy incitement to grow and they can’t with these three misuses. I have faced a few problems when growing up worrying about my family member’s health and happiness. One was that I sometimes used to think that my parents might get a divorce. I only thought this because my parents got into very little arguments
a few times. So I was worried that my parents would be mad at each other and also I was afraid it would ruin my live in disappointment and affect me from growing up. Also when I found out that my grandpa had cancer I was afraid it would change my life forever.
Knowing one of your family members has cancer is like being strapped on a rail road track just hoping the train will run out of coal before it hits you. Luckily that train or my grandfathers cancer stopped before it could hit me and for any reason it didn't I don't know how I would feel with out him it probably would have had a big part on my life for growing up. These things could have affected my life in many ways some maybe even bad but I’m very happy with my life and appreciate everything that I own.
            Kids need help from people including there parents. Without them some teens may not even be able to function. Teens need to be guided in smart directions so that they don't make wrong choices. Kids and other people are I big source to problems for teenagers and if everyone helps each other I feel a lot of teens will loose a lot of there problems.


Self assessment:
1. I’m continuing to work on expanding my CM’s.
2. One strong point is see in my writing is my SD’s
3. A week point I see is my closing par I almost feel like I didn't spend enough time on it and it didn't come out to good.